Who are they cheating?
Glad handing, and fleecing?
Robbed and blinded,
Cheer the lying.

Who are we thinking
Runs all of our prisons?
Don't even know
It cuts to our very soul.

Don't care what you think,
Don't matter what you do,
Still gonna drink up your milk,
And eat your honey too.

Raising Cattle.
Herding Sheep.
You are our slaves.
Not losing sleep.

Who are they beating?
Who are they beating?
Cursed and dying.
No denying.

Who are they beating?
Who are they beating?
Cursed and dying.
No denying.

Don't matter who you are,
Don't care who you know,
Still gonna poison your life,
And keep up your hope.

Raising Cattle.
Herding Sheep.
You are our slaves.
Not losing sleep.

Worse will be coming.
You can keep on running,
But we're like bloodhounds,
You will be buried, once you are found.

Raising Cattle.
Herding Sheep.
You are our slaves.
Not losing any sleep.

Reminds me to some Cattle Decapitation lyrics so that's a plus.

Otherwise i find the lack of obscurity and generic message to be lackluster at best. But hey if that'ss what you're going for you nailed the objective.

As for overall progression in your overall work that's still something to be judged later.

I think it's much better in the overall scheme of things and to be fairly honest, when I was coming up with lyrics...the chorus I suppose you could call it, because it repeats...I'd had some Tool songs in mind for the cadence. The other parts, those are sort-of a wailing sorrow. I hope to record a rehearsal of sorts similar to what I did with that bluesy number because I want to make sure that the song sounds right.