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[n00b] Member  Joined: Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:00 pm Posts: 5727 Location: Dakota, North 
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 Re: New Song - GoneKwang! wrote: Bleep wrote: You know what your right, go ahead and enjoy mediocrity. Isn't that what that list of corporate leaders would like you to do? it's a matter of simplicity. If it was truly a simplistic song, why defend in such large proportions? _________________  |
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[n00b] Member  Joined: Thu Nov 26, 2009 1:11 pm Posts: 1736 Location: Gainesville, Florida
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Re: New Song - Gone Kwang! wrote: Bleep wrote: You know what your right, go ahead and enjoy mediocrity. Isn't that what that list of corporate leaders would like you to do? It's not a matter of mediocrity, it's a matter of simplicity. If I wanted this particular song to be of a complex or intricate nature, I would have written something like this: viewtopic.php?f=104&t=44530 which quite clearly demonstrates that I know the difference between this and something that you're attempting to say is a 'more valid form of expression'. I guess I'm wrong.......in only assuming this to be the only simple and straightforward piece you have made. Idk honestly that other poem just seemed more serious just by the matter of which it speaks. In terms of it having depth or anything that'd make a song/poem interesting, it is wanting. I feel like depth and all those wonderful things come from allusion and word play (among other things), simply rhyming or speaking in a serious tone doesn't make a song/poem deep or w.e your going for. I think you need to stop taking poetry lessons from William McGonagall and try to put some effort into your work. Otherwise they are just pointless posts. _________________  Rokatanski wrote: I F*CKING love you. |
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Re: New Song - Gone Bleep wrote: Kwang! wrote: Bleep wrote: You know what your right, go ahead and enjoy mediocrity. Isn't that what that list of corporate leaders would like you to do? It's not a matter of mediocrity, it's a matter of simplicity. If I wanted this particular song to be of a complex or intricate nature, I would have written something like this: viewtopic.php?f=104&t=44530 which quite clearly demonstrates that I know the difference between this and something that you're attempting to say is a 'more valid form of expression'. I guess I'm wrong.......in only assuming this to be the only simple and straightforward piece you have made. Idk honestly that other poem just seemed more serious just by the matter of which it speaks. In terms of it having depth or anything that'd make a song/poem interesting, it is wanting. I feel like depth and all those wonderful things come from allusion and word play (among other things), simply rhyming or speaking in a serious tone doesn't make a song/poem deep or w.e your going for. I think you need to stop taking poetry lessons from William McGonagall and try to put some effort into your work. Otherwise they are just pointless posts. Who the F*CK is William McGonagall? It might help that I don't read much poetry and I'm hardly attempting to be clever with wordplay. It is obviously straight to the point, and I like it that way. _________________  |
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