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AngryKitten
Lazer Jesus
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:00 am Posts: 8983 Location: Georgia
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 Writing while drunk.
So the other night I got really emo while drunk and went for a walk. I ended up at the Wal-mart nearby and bought a pad of paper and a pencil. This is what came out of it and now I'm contemplating finishing the story.
Quote: Andrew often walked the streets at night and pondered why the birds scatter as he drew near. One tree would empty in to the next until no trees were left for their escape. The birds would then disappear in to the darkness and he would be alone again, like he always was.
He continued down the path until he came to a gas station on the corner. It had a run down store. The owners had purchased the land when they were young and had since grown too old to take care of it, yet they were too proud to hire someone else to do it.
Andrew entered the store and bought a gallon of water and a Moonpie. He always did. When he paid Mrs. Murson, he would walk outside and sit on one of their rotting benches to watch those who would pass by, usually with their noses in the air.
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G_I_Joe
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Joined: Wed Sep 07, 2005 11:00 pm Posts: 1798 Location: NJ
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That really good, for being drunk...
I say you should continue it
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| Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:13 pm |
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AnalChowMein
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Joined: Sun Mar 05, 2006 12:00 am Posts: 3216 Location: Michigan
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Sounds like the start to Columbine.
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| Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:40 pm |
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Pyrokid
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Joined: Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:00 am Posts: 2334 Location: Texas
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Just make sure it ends with "No Andrew, you are the demons."
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Ninja
Forum Maggott
Joined: Mon Feb 18, 2008 12:00 am Posts: 134
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And then Angrykitten was the zombies.
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AngryKitten
Lazer Jesus
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:00 am Posts: 8983 Location: Georgia
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no pyrokid u r the demons
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| Wed Mar 26, 2008 5:36 pm |
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Pyrokid
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Joined: Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:00 am Posts: 2334 Location: Texas
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.//4 itchy.
tasty.
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CorpseHumper
Community Owner
Joined: Sun Apr 25, 2004 11:00 pm Posts: 8643 Location: Southwest Florida
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I think you should continue it too, "Andrew".
By the way, we all know you lied. You bought a small bottle of water and a gallon of Moon Pies.
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| Thu Mar 27, 2008 3:21 pm |
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AngryKitten
Lazer Jesus
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:00 am Posts: 8983 Location: Georgia
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CorpseHumper wrote: I think you should continue it too, "Andrew".
By the way, we all know you lied. You bought a small bottle of water and a gallon of Moon Pies.
You caught me. D:
The Moon Pies were so delicious though. :(
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Spork
Dirty Hippie (nobody likes this guy)
Joined: Thu Oct 21, 2004 11:00 pm Posts: 2198 Location: ATX
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lol. Yeah man finish the story. It's not bad.
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Mantis
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Joined: Wed Aug 03, 2005 11:00 pm Posts: 745 Location: Miramar, FL
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G_I_Joe wrote: That really good, for being drunk... I say you should continue it
yeah, continue to drink Yellow_Flash_Colorz_PDT_06
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Vendetta
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Joined: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:00 am Posts: 2057 Location: Ottawa, Canada
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haha nice if u finish it u will get free buttsecks from pyro =)
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DeathTaker
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Joined: Wed Nov 23, 2005 12:00 am Posts: 1114 Location: West Palm Beach, Florida
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AnalChowMein wrote: Sounds like the start to Columbine.
LMAO!!
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| Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:39 pm |
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eviI-pie
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Joined: Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:00 pm Posts: 2649
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and then Andrew couldn't take it anymore, he finally snapped.
The little old lady who was entering the store had no idea that when she left her house to get adult diapers for her leaking problem, that a 1200lb gorilla was going to attack leaving her in a pool of her own blood and piss.
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RussianTrix
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Joined: Sat Oct 13, 2007 11:00 pm Posts: 2049 Location: UNDER YOUR BED
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~Cotinue to DRINK and finish this Awesome story! i think maybe you should publish it too~!
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